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Feel the warmth of your breath as you near me.
Feel the tingle all over my skin.
Feel the warmth off your breath as you near me.
I shout but you cant come in.

Feel the stare of your eyes as you see me.
Dream that you watch me fall into sleep.
Feel the stare of your eyes as you see me.
I`ll forever be yours still to keep.

Hear the voice in my head as you call me.
The echos of days gone by.
Hear the voice in my head as you call me.
Have you witnessed the tears that I cry?

Sense the loneliness start as I miss you.
I want you to know that your in my heart.
Sense the loneliness start as I miss you.
I`m with you even though we`re apart.

Feel the pride in my heart cause I loved you.
I know now your just in my head.
Feel the pride in my heart cause I loved you.
For you`ve been a long time dead.
©2006-2009 ~liveitloveit
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Not sure where this came from but i am pretty pleased with it.

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:iconmortisnoctem:
Makes me feel kinda sad because it speaks of a love I never had, athought the love that is spoken in this poem ended quite badly, it still makes me sad because I never had a true love or any love. :(
Anyway, moving on from my life to the poem, it's really good, everyone "loves" a good breakup poem, the feelings are very true, the wrds are wonderfully placed, I think you have a future as a DA poet.
:iconliveitloveit:
thankyou for your comment means alot. You will find true love it will touch you when you least expect it .I expect to hear all about in a poem inspired by it

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The only limitation is your own imagination...
:iconconstant-elevation:
yes indeed she does have a future on here, well said mortis :D

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The last thing I want to do is hurt you, but it's still on the list
:icondragutzza:
great poem..I just love it..and the feelings that live inside it..
here's something that i thing u will like: [link]

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Run your fingers through my soul. For once, just once, feel exactly what I feel, believe what I believe, perceive as I perceive, look, experience, examine, and for once, just once..understand... [link]
:iconlouiseodier:
really, really good. i love it. :+fav:

susanna

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If you love, love without reservation. If you fight, fight without fear. :)

=Palestine-Club
=No-More-Ignorance

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